Are you aware of what qualities should your husband have?All women evaluate their partner according to some criteria.The person with whom I will spend my whole life should have some special features.
First of all,I want a husband who is responsible for his duties.He should have a permanent work which provides enough income to support our lives.I want a husband who will take care of me and our children when I am busy and sick,a husband who will be a good father, a good friend for me and my children.He should support our children when they are in trouble.I want a husband who will take them to the outside,play them or help them in their lessons.
Secondly,I want a husband who is intelligent and cultured so that we can make chats about everything.I want a husband who arranges surprises in our special days such as our wedding day,my birthday etc.My husband should be understanding and respectful to me.I want a husband who is friendly and humanist, a husband who will love me forever.He should also love people,animals,nature and should work for the benefit of mankid.
Thirdly,I want a husband who will not bother me with trivial things,but he should share his daily experiences with me.He should be honest even if he makes mistakes.I want a husband who will be sensitive to my ideas and desires.I want a husband who will respect my family member and my friends.My husband should keep away from alcohol and cigarette.I want a husband who will take care of himself ,a husband who is well-groomed and meticulous.
To summarize,I want a husband with whom I should feel myself secure and peaceful.He should be faithful and love me in every condition.If,by chance,I find a husband like that,I will do everything to please him.Every woman wants a husband like that,doesn't she?
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi Ayşen:
ReplyDeleteI like your essay a lot.. There isn't any mistake about grammer. Organization is OK. Content and fluency is so effective that I like your ideal husband model..but in the first sentence, instead of "aware of", you can use a better verb such as do you have an ideal husband model in your mind or could you decide on a husband model ,what qualities should your husband have...thank you for writing.
Hi Aysen,
ReplyDeleteyour essay is really good. your sentences and your feelings are soo clear. you have express your feeling veyr impressingly but you could use sentence of ı want a husband fewer I think. thanks a lot.
hi ayşen
ReplyDeletei like your essay there aren' any grammatical mistakes content is also good..thanks..
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeletehi ayşen ı like your esaay so much =) you are compeletely right bu ı couldnt see ironical words and phrases but content is so good.and i couldnt see grammatical errors.thank you =)
ReplyDelete