Thursday, 4 March 2010

SECRET BEAUTIES(comparision and contrast essay)

I have been in two different places which gave me an impression that in the future I must live in a small,natural place.One of them is Abana,where I enjoy the taste of silence and the other is Amasra which hugs me with its sincere hospitality and takes my all sorrows away...In fact,they are extremely similar to each other apart from a few differences.
First of all,both are situated on the coast of Black Sea Region,so there are lots of wooden-detached houses which have a breathtaking view.Amasra has many historical houses,castles and mosques.People especially native tourists come to see these touristic places.Because of its closeness to big cities such as Ankara and İstanbul it is always a favourite holiday place with its clean beach and green nature.Similarly,Abana has many wooden mansions.They are so magnificent that you can't help yourself taking some photos in front of them.Furthermore,when you walk around you can see lots of shops,cafes and restaurants where people eat their traditional food and buy souvenirs.
Despite their similarities,these places are a bit different.Life in Abana is more comfortable than Amasra.The first thing I notice is the people wearing jogging suits and walking in the Hacıveli Canyon.It is a wonderful canyon for people who want to be in nature.The second difference is the population of Abana.Especially in winters I can say that it is a dead place.There is not anybody apart from old people,but Amasra is always crowded with its dense population.
In conclusion,these are two place I like.For me both were so sincere and charming that I didn't take my eyes off.When I was in these places I felt that I was in my hometown.I am sure that If I have a chance to go again,I won't miss this oppurtunity.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Ayşen,
    It is really a good assay.l like it completely.Thanks for your effort.There is a small mistake we should correct it=> not "The second differences" but "the second difference"..ok see you later..

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  2. ln addition,like your third paragraph, your second paragraph should include a topic sentence before "first of all.." ok..

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  3. Hi Ayşen,
    I like your essay a lot. It is really good. I agree with Sonay. your second paragraph doesn't include a topic sentence, however; ıt is almost perfect.

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  4. very good essay.I can not thoroughly find an errors.congrulations:)

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