Getting divorced is one of the most common problems in every society.Marrying without thinking logically is very cammon among people.They behave according to only their feelings,so result can be a disaster.Recently,in Turkey most of the couples have been divorcing in the first year of their marriage.There are some reasons why people decide to get divorced.
The most common reason is severe incompatibility.This results from lack of interest,irresponsibility,jeolousy,financial difficulties and losing respect to each other.
When couples have problems,wife or husband may fall in love with another person.This is the another reason of getting divorced.Apart from this,there are some important factors which make marriage unbearable such as beating,using alcohol,gambling and sexual problems.Sometimes couples have to continue their marriage for the sake of their children,but it is completely wrong.Growing in a family which has lots of problems affects children very badly.
In conclusion,getting divorced is an important issue for every country.To avoid from its problems people must be very careful while choosing a partner.
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hi aysen,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote your writing very well.organization and content are good enough.However,there is a mistake instead of "fall in love to " you should use "fall in love with" l think. l hope l am not wrong. SEE YOU my friend:)
Dear Ayşen :)
ReplyDeleteyour writng is good in general.there are some mistakes in grammar but it is everyone's problem :)
I agree with you.There some important reasons that cause divorce.But dealing with mixed emotions after divorce is difficult.Childrens are affected this situation.They may also feel pressure to choose one of their parents.therefore,like you said,To avoid from its problems people must be very careful while choosing a partner.
see you :)
Topic is very effective and also your topic sentence.with your thesis statement you carefully attached to the paragraphs.I liked it.congrulations..:)
ReplyDeletereally good essay. I appreciate you(when I say these words I feel as if a teacher. you wrote about important topic(divorce)
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