Friday, 22 October 2010

COMPARE AND CONTRAST PARAGRAPH ABOUT TWO FILMS

Angela's Ashes and The Miracle Worker are two famous films about the theme of difficulties in life.They have several things in common.First,both are dramatic films which tell the real lives of Helen Keller and Frank McCourt.A second similarity in these two movies is that main characters try to overcome their obstacles with the help of great perseverance.Apart from their similarities,they have some differences.For example;The Miracle Worker is about Helen's disability due to a sudden illness,but in Angela's Ashes Frank lives in poverty and misery life with his family.When compared to Helen who can not see and hear,Frank is luckier because he has no physical handicap.To sum up,although both are succesful and well-played I think Angela's Ashes is much more effective than the other in terms of its visual and sound effects.

3 comments:

  1. It is nice paragraph,i couldn't find any mistakes

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  2. Hi!
    You have written a good and wrongless paragraph, but I think "A second way in which these two movies is..." is a bit poor and confusing.
    Well done!

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  3. ayşen,your topic sentence is clear,but (a second way...)in this sentence is a bit confusing .the other thing is (when compared), this sentence is passive, but you compare the two films.I hope you understand what I mean.It is a well-written paragraph.

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