How do you feel when you have to wait something you couldnt live without?All over the world more than 88,000 men,women and children are currently waiting for life-saving transplants.I think organ donation is one way for anyone to help save the lives of others.
Each day about 74 people a day receive an orgen transplant;however,approximately 6300 people die waiting for donors.These statistics show that lots of people are waiting our helps to continue thir lives.
Imagine that how people may feel when they are in hospitals waiting for a healthy organ.This is a really sad situation for them and their family,isn't it?Because of the lack of people willing to donate organs many people will have to wait in hospitals.There are not any choice for them to live except for a healthy organ.
Organ donation is a topic which contains many conflicting views.Some people oppose to donating their organs.They think that it is not suitable in terms of ethical and religion.On the other hand,some believe that saving anyone's life is the most sacred thing in the world and this can not be thought unacceptable.
In conclusion,I think people should donate their organs without hesitation.A lot of people are waiting our helps to become healthy.We must see organ donation as a gift of life.ıf you don't help them,they will die or have to wait in hospitals.Don't forget their lives are in your hands...
Your topic s very effective.I liked it very much but you should speak about counter argument a little more except from this it is good.
ReplyDeleteEverything is good but l think you should leave two blanks after each paragraph as a result we can easily distinguish the paragraphs which are bodies.Anyway,thanks for your positive ideas about organ donation.
ReplyDeletei think you researched it and it is reaaly argumantative essay.However,it is too short.Hook and another rules are used.It is effective .Counter argument is like the sentence which we use in opinion essay.I got that in argumantative essay we are oppesed to an event or issue but in opinion essay we are oppesed to some people opinions like this :) never mind.I'm still really trying to get :)
ReplyDeleteit is really good :)
I think your topic is really effective.However I couldnt see the counter argument in your essay.There are some grammatical mistakes,too.Maybe I correct them mistakenly or they are in the correct order.However you should inspect them.Look at the parts which I realized: -I think organ donation is one way (for anyone to help save )the lives of others.- These statistics show that lots of people are waiting (for) our helps to continue thir lives.-Because of the lack of people('s) willing to donate organs many people will have to wait in hospitals.-A lot of people are waiting (for) our helps to become healthy.
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